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  • Writing Tips Re: English vs. American

    Let me see if can think of some. Lorry - Truck Petrol - Gas Lift - Elevator Maths - Math Anti-clockwise - Counter-clockwise Antenna - Aerial Line - Queue Pram ...

    Jun 20, 2007
  • Media Reviews Re: RedWall Series

    I love the first book, but the second one dragged and sang a familiar tune, and then the third one was exactly the same so I quit. The books pretty ...

    Jun 20, 2007
  • Media Reviews Re: Eragon

    I actually liked Eragon and the way it was written, and I found it was an interesting read. I read it when I was eleven and haven't bothered to read ...

    Jun 20, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Answering machines

    Wisteria: Er....hi? Is your refrigerator running? If it is you better go...um...catch it? Glacia: You suck at this. Wisteria: This is stupid, doing prank calls... Glacia: Fine, I'll do it. ...

    May 12, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Crystal

    Thank you very much for your review. I've been looking for a rock-solid, helpful review rather than one that obviously shows that the person reviewing hasn't read it. I did ...

    May 12, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Crystal

    Please review...

    May 10, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Fantasy character profiles?

    I usually go with: Name: Gender: Age: Born: Personality: History: Relationship(s): Flaws: Hobbies: Habits: It's just nice to get it down on paper, and some people like to record the ...

    May 8, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Trina and Imagination (still looking for better name) Ch. 1

    I really like the plot. It's very interesting and ensnares the reader to continue reading. I enjoy your writing style; it's fresh and new and easily read with a bit ...

    May 8, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Crystal

    The Crystal Magnolia Park was nearly empty that late afternoon. Few people left to go outside despite the peculiar warmness that had suddenly came after a week of harsh, bitter ...

    May 8, 2007
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Writing or typing? How do you write your story?

    I prefer to write my stories on a word processor on the computer. However, if inspiration strikes at the wrong moment I always carry a notepad or a notebook and ...

    May 8, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Chapter names?

    I prefer chapter names and I use them in my writing. They make me think of what the chapter is going to be about and adds a bit of suspense. ...

    May 6, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: name association

    I see a creative, outgoing person with dark hair and eyes. Wisteria Berkley

    May 6, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Worst Ending line EVER!

    "Then, suddenly a bomb dropped out of the sky and killed everyone. Hahahaha! I mean...how sad...THE END!" or "Everyone lived happily ever after as rich, beautiful, smart, nice people who ...

    May 5, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Colours

    Colour is English whereas color is American. Just like Paid is English and payed is American....I can go on and on... Actually, in America we say paid. Payed is considered ...

    May 5, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Five Tips for Writing Convincing Characters

    I agree with all your points, but sometimes people follow them and bring them too far making some hopeless character who's ugly, everyone hates them, and they have so many ...

    May 5, 2007


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