Elong451

I love your story, and I would love to read more. I agree though with what ranger hawk has said about the italics. When you italisize thoughts; the reader at ...

Tell the reader you mean children when you say "Four years since they got married, and I've jumped from one out of three, to one out of seven. That's a ...

Thank you bella!

This is so adorable. It's like the puppy in your picture is speaking about the humans staying up late. XD Very nice job. I also agree with what Crimsona stated ...

I love your story. May i ask if English is your first language? If it's not this is an amazing story. You have done an exelent job. Work on ways ...

Hello darling, I am a noob to this site, here is my review of your story. Are you using an omniscient view when you write this? It's very interesting. I ...

lol so do i. :3

@ally, I think it's General fiction. It's also sort of action romance.

@tiger, thanks so very much. :3 I'm looking forawrd to sharing and reviewing.

Hello my name is Katelyn, but my friends call me Kat. I go to a school in the mountains called Weeping Willow Grove High School with my two best friends ...

My name is Emily-Louise, Like most of you I have a passion for writing. I found out I had a talent for writing in the fourth grade. I wrote a ...