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"You'de think that if we were really turning into some stupid immortal that we ouldn't get hurt." ^ you'd ^ take out into some stupid ^ wouldn't cant wait for ...

This poem is the saddest thing i have read all day. I know how it feels to not believe some thing so good would happen to you. It's especially hard ...

I like this. I like how this is set. Your title refers to a prince, is he bored? Tired? ignorant of the evil? If he is any of these things ...

*agrees with above said * I love your detail and visual reperesntation in this. i can see the images clearly in my mind. :)

This is really amazing and expessive. You've got some great talent!!! welcome to YWS!!!!! glad to see yet another expressive poet. I agree with your idea to back up and ...

thats right!!! do what you wanna do! break free from conformaty!!!! welcome to YWS!!!!! it's good to see another expessive poet and writer!

these are simply amazing!!!!! It's so unrealistcally beautiful. It gives that "where am I?" feeling. Great shots!!! may i ask where this is?

I still remember the first time I met Blake. We were going to the same elementary school; I didn’t know him that well. I was playing in the sand box ...

Watching as if through a glass. The world is moving slowly around me, doctors, friends, and family. They whisper to me but my ears hear only a soft buzzing. If ...

I feel like hitting you with one of my few and fainting attention rays which radiate from my small mind. If you really feel this way, and i do too ...

I know exactly how you feel in this poem. I also have one whom likes my stories, but never shall like me. I absoluetly ave to agree with what lilymoore ...

Very adorable for a joke poem. I adore lisps. it's almost like a british accent, you just want them to say more things. My best friend has a lisp and ...

Very well retold. In the part where zeus rains down on her is the best part. How long does/can your story be? i wonder if you could discribe the comings ...

This is some amazing dramatic poetry. I feel the emotions ebing from the rhyme. It is unfortunate that heart break is the biggest cause of the greatest artwork and poetry.

I could hear his laughter all around me. My heart pounded as i ran and lept over the forest floor. “Why are you running Calipso? You know I don't bite... ...