Elocina

The few seconds he spent in her trick had been what she needed to get into the room. The storage boxes had been stacked neatly around the pod, rendering it ...

The Hunter followed her. He wasn't as used to her tricks as Orith had been, but the force came to him more freely than it had Orith. She noted the ...

Viberations ran through the ship, whispering of a hunter. Evgrisa felt them as she would her own body. Her blood ran thick with adrenaline, sharpening her senses until the smallest ...

1) Inconsiderate behavior 2) use of profanity every other word 3) Teachers who insist you know stuff, don't teach the subject, and repeat the phrase "Think About It" For now, ...

Love is like the word Color. Which one? And from that, which shade? sort of like an onion, I guess.

Evgrisa rolled over with a groan. The valve must have had sensors on it to shut itself off, she realized, otherwise, she'd have been as dead as Saysos. Kicking him ...

******************************************************************************************* They were back on Master Starweaver's ship again, and the two Jedis were involved in some sort of meeting Ev

Another tip would to be to describe the landscape in someplace besides the begining. Description slows the story down, and whenever I see it in a book, I typically skip ...

Darth Vengence watched her, anger swirling around him. How dare she come to his domain, come and leave at her whim... "I can kill her, Master." The voice came from ...

((Well, do what you want, I guess...are you planning a different character, then?)) Evgrisa hesitated near Austrara for a second, then jogged up to Master Starweaver. "You understand he's more ...

((Ah, Sabradan, don't be such a wet blanket :P :P . Look, he's using punctuation! Like you asked :wink: He's slowly getting the hang of things. If he keeps working ...

Evgrisa blinked. "Umm, sure. Master Starweaver?" What do you do with a nutcase like this? She thought, looking to Master Starweaver with a blank stare.

"Thank you, Masters." she followed Master Starweaver's example and bowed before following them out. ********************************************************************************* Outside the temple

She smiled, briefly, "No, he never took me as an apprentice. Yet, he didn't recruit another since I came to him. He was borderlining my servitude. I was trained as ...

"I thank you and the Jedi Council." She bowed her head, then turned to Master Starweaver, "I could not sense him, either. I knew him. He could not sense me, ...