EllyMelly

Good Morning, Sela! Wow, this was what I was actually looking for all morning. (your story, I mean.) Glass Slippers was a very delightful read. It's so sweet. I really ...

Good Afternoon, Jasmine! Here are some of my comments and/or suggestions: 1) Okay. Like this is in third person view and not first. The beginning was confusing (being in 3rd) ...

Good Afternoon, Jasmine! Here are my comments and/or suggestions: 1) How long has Ash known Stella? Are we (the readers) going to know anything else about her? Likes and dislikes? ...

Good Afternoon, Jasmine. Here are some of my comments and/or suggestions: 1) When I got to the second paragraph I got really confused about something. This sentence: Ashlynn tried to ...

Everyone: To those who reviewed, it is greatly appreciated. But, I am no longer continuing this piece. Look for my new works in the later future!

Good Morning, *writewatiwant*. Here are some of my comments and/or suggestions: 1) When reading the first sentence, I felt like there could be more to it. Like here: * I ...

Good Afternoon, Ashley. Here are some of my comments and/or suggestions: 1) While reading I immediately thought of Cranford (Gaskell) about the gossiping folk and the works of Dickens, of ...

Everyone: For those who reviewed, it is greatly appreciated. But, I am no longer continuing this piece. Look for my new works in the later future!

Good Morning, Jasmine. Here are some of my comments and/or suggestions: 1) When I was reading the first sentence, I seriously thought Jesse was a female. And then I thought ...

Good Late Morning, Jasmine. Here are some of my comments and/or suggestions: First here's a little mistake: I followed his gaze to my dress. It was an expensive gown that ...

Good Morning, Jasmine. Here are some of my comments and/or suggestions: 1) This first part was mentioned as Lizzie's POV. Is she the narrator for the whole story or is ...

Good Afternoon, Ashley. Wow. Like I said before I was immediately captivated into this novel. I don't know why, but I am. You know I never heard of Hallmark, South ...

Good Afternoon, Ashley. First off, I couldn't see any grammar mistakes or any minor or major mistakes. So kudos to you! One of the major reasons I didn't pay attention ...

Good Afternoon, Angel! Okay, like the first sentence made me laugh! Zombies? Reminds me a lot of my sister. (she loves all things zombies) I have a question here, is ...

Hey Angel (mind if I just call you that?), Wow. Like really, wow. This. Was. Intriguing. I'm serious. After reading this part, I knew I was in the mood to ...