EllieGoose

The part where I say "But you came back you you, we started to win" I am refering to he came back to himself. thank you for reading.

I really like the idea behind it but it needs different word choice and maybe a tiny ryme sceam to brighten it up just a tad to make attractive to ...

Hello everyone will you please harshly critique my poem. I am terrible when it comes to grammar and punctuation and tell me if it's woth submitting into a small contest. ...