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Re: Pulling Me Under
I just love how real this story is because it shows how nerve wracking yet how exciting it is to fall in love. You're an amazing writer... Now I feel ...
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Re: The Queen of Dolls
OMG that freaked me out! I love the idea of the cliffhanger because it makes us crave more, and good job showing how a child can easily be influenced by ...
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Re: I Love You
All I can say is... Wow. I loved that you wrote the story from a personal standpoint and it's very interesting to see what is really going through the main ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Raquél: Outside Looking In
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really value your opinions, and if you feel that you have to critique my writing at any moment that's totally fine by ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Raquél: Outside Looking In
This is the story of me. I was the girl who was always underestimated, taken advantage of, or picked on while no one seemed to realize that I was also ...
Sep 27, 2011
