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Raquél's everyday routine and the setbacks she faces with her tormentors... Chapter 3: Drained Raquél That morning I'd awoken with the most awful cramps in the pit of my abdomen. ...

This story is the perfect example of how ANYONE from any background or social status can overcome the "cafeteria fringe" and kill the stereotype that popular and unpopular don't belong ...

For a short piece it sure tells a lot about love and how it can sometimes cause destruction when there is conflict between lovers.. This story was amazing!! :)

This poem made me smile!! I normally don't read poems because they're usually boring, but this is why we have YWS so that emerging poets like you can entertain us ...

Lol I love this poem, it's so clever. Human nature strikes again. If we see something that is meant to stay off limits or forbidden of course we're gonna check ...

Wow... The title says it all. I have no problem whatsoever with the use of medieval words, but make sure that you use the correct forms with a few words ...

I love, love, love poems that leave its readers with a sense of mystery and angst. It shows the true beauty of a girl who is struggling with her self ...

This is one of the best poems I've ever read! It was so beautiful and vehement, and I can't think of anything else to say right now because I'm just ...

Great job with the rhyming and flow of the poem. My only suggestion would be to add spaces between lines so that you have more teases because it sometimes flows ...

Even though this poem isn't very long, it sends a poignant message that for me, touched me in a way that I could relate to.. :)

This was a very haunting poem that touches the very core of someone who has no idea what goes on behind closed doors and to people who are struggling with ...

Great use of similes!! I love your poems! :)

I really enjoyed this poem a lot mostly because I love romance. You're a great poet!! :)

Raquél: Outside Looking In Chapter 2: Mami y Papi If I could describe the bond between my mother and me, I would say that it was unbreakable... Impenetrable. It was ...

Lol I can just imagine a troll face at the end of that...