ElizabethFiction

I'm already grown up (by age, at least) so I'm on my way to becoming a daycare worker. I'm going into my 3rd year of college this fall and I ...

This poem is simply captivating and beautiful. It just shows the impact a death can have on someone even if they don't know the victim. I loved it! :)

Beautiful poem. I loved the way you showed that the mother does everything to protect her child even if that means that she'll loose her life in the process. I ...

There's nothing I love better than a poem that expresses the wonders of death and where our lives continue after we're gone. There's nothing I have to critique on this ...

This is a beautiful poem overall, but one suggestion would be to capitalize the beginning of each stanzas and make sure when to end each line. But you're a great ...

Even though I am a fan of more cheerful literature, nothing catches my attention more than a dark poem. This poem is awesome!! :)

Such a great poem! I love the skillful use of similes and imagery, and I felt as if I was in the poetry. Also I love dark poems!! :]

Great composition, this is great!! I love the use of color and shading, and the finished product made it much better! :)

Great use of media and value... I especially love sketches that are meant for clothing design!! :)

This poem sends an inspiring message to anyone who feels trapped in a place that they can't get out of... Keep writing!! :)

For a quick poem it really sums up what many people fear on a day to day basis and I'm glad that you didn't make this poem a long one ...

Thank you for pointing out the space out... I think it was a typo but thank goodness you noticed. Thank you for reading, hope you enjoyed!! :)

Chapter 4: Ángelita Unknown Point of View The team and I were down on our luck that morning once we discovered that Mike's car had broken down. Taking the bus ...

I really like this poem because when a child is christened such a unique name, they may think that it defines them because of the harsh nicknames they have had ...

I'm glad you came up with this concept because it's a sad time when children are suddenly stripped of their innocence from a real world situation, and it's true that ...