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Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 18
Everything that you dont' believe in, and that is wrong, you manage to potray... Now I'm sad because Raed is dead... and Jared isn't... in the end I hope he ...
Jul 9, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 17
is it supposed to be Samatha or SAMANTHA? Because... Samatha is kind of weird but OK. I saw that there was going to be a sex scene, so I skipped ...
Jul 9, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 16
Heh, you think Jared is the evil one but then you realize tehre is an entire group of those scumbags... This was my favorite part """Jared crossed the room until ...
Jul 8, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 15
WAIT!!! ... WHY IS JACOB LOOKING FOR HIS SON ALEZANDER IF ALEZANDERS FATHER WAS... ... ... What was his name... Anton?? ... I haven't read the first chapters lately... all ...
Jul 8, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 13
Aww, how sweet. :) It's funny... I like Quinn. She's like the fun part of me... the one that's not drunk though. Heh.
Jul 6, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 12
"Tea eyes widened in shock, “Well, that’s bad, because… I don’t know where the kitchen is.” Eolen blinked in disbelief, “What!?” Tea giggled nervously, “But I’ve a general idea, wher
Jul 6, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 11
*Has Fatal Heart Attack* Sorry I've been slow on reading but... here I go. QUINN'S A GIRL?!?!? I hate you... Well I did like this, it reminded me of a ...
Jul 6, 2007 -
Re: A Glimpse Of West Coast Youth
Fabulous photos. I loved the Surrender to the Sunbeams... because it just... the way his body is, it's just very ... I don't know how to describe it, but it's ...
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: Goodnight...
You must be kind and say Good Morning and Goodnight to your Can Opener... or it will eat you.
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: How Often Do You Critique?
Who cares when I critique? I don't give anything helpful, but if I see something I really like and want to help that person, I comment usually once a month... ...
May 10, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
Pfft... I don't care if it's a statement broken up, it's how you read it. Apparently you haven't read my favorite poet... whose name I cannot remember at the moment ...
May 9, 2007 -
Re: Artistic Talent
There is no second stanza... this is the whole poem.... (O_O)
May 2, 2007 -
Re: Artistic Talent
Artistic talent involves putting together two ailments that are complete opposites and making them work (This is the greatest poem I've ever written, what're you doing with your lives?! Some ...
May 2, 2007 -
Re: Fate Of Heartache
Wow... I never read your poetry before RashBear... ... XD... goddamn me... but... Yeah, I like this. Just the letters all of them being capital kind of made it confusing ...
May 2, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
It's very short. As intended of course. I'm not in the mood for critique, but write some down and I'll be sure to bitch later. ---Elizabeth Depression is when you ...
May 1, 2007
