Elizabeth

*twitches* Will you PLEASE just publish a book already so I can BUY it Gum?! HUH?! PUBLISH SOMETHING ALREADY! *Spreak the word of Gum* *Bows down to Gum* *Chews bubble ...

derange Should be DERANGED. I'm not rewally the lyrical person... But I liked it. it was OK. But not like I'll buy an album unless you improve. Don't let me ...

Whoever you are, poetic stranger, I love you. Wow... this was a great poem though... It gave me a lot to think about... It might scare little children telling them ...

Ugh... all hope for me is lost... You have out... worded The Black Rose.... There is nothing... I have to say.... Nothing I CAN say... Whoa... Whoa... Whoa....

I like it... Its better than a.... *forgets* 575. That one :P My goodness I'm terrible haha.... HAIKU! It was sweet. You should add more in some sort of series, ...

Yeah a lot of grammar and punctuation mess ups. so I got to about... the second and a half paragraph. I liked what I read, but some things could have ...

You like me, you really really like me :P. Wow... this was lovely... too bad my childhood's happiest memories involved sleeping and talking to myself for hours and hours at ...

To scare you I'll tell you: A white shirt ... And underwear, of course Just no pants. It's the internet, the last time I wore real pants or anything is ...

All' Quiet on the Western Front by Erich Maria Remarque - banned in 1933 Germany and public burned. Ouch, write a book about the horrors of the First World War, ...

(Shivers) More death now? What is wrong with this month... it can't be the cold... Anyway thanks for all the comments everybody.... I'm also sorry for those who have lost ...

em.... 4/10 It sort of unoriginal And then it's quite old you should change it to the : Richard: Kwattah? Or something like that

Hmm what do I know Cascada's Everytime we touch The dumb song ANd the beer song Tales from the sick too... (which is only 50 seconds or so) Shame and ...

"...ya know..." That bothered me... The rest of the story... didn't really have the word YA though... *shrugs* I have to go to school in an hour so I can't ...

Just checking back on it all... and what Bob said... Change the words, don't change the meaning. Meaning is EVERYTHING

Hee hee... I like some of their songs Lying is the most fun a girl can have without taking her clothes off AND I write sins, not tradgedies I still ...