Elizabeth

All these sea terms and mystical creatures and it's so lovely. (though you could have used mermaids an undines and such :P) I especially like the part about the sirens ...

The second one's chin was... feh! The First ones eyes were great and the third was great nothing much to say or critiuque deeply on, but nice works :)

Not that I'm giving up hope on that third stanza, but as you read what happens when I've taken it out, is there anyway to replace it with? Anything? Perhaps ...

TYPE C! So on the site.... Aside from type C -- Females dominate ... for now... Hmm.... I should look up a bestseller list and see how many novilests are ...

Thou art mad. ... Anybody have opinons on this? Anybody ELSE? I'm serious, I think there are more female writers than male in the site... perhaps the world.

Usually C have over protective parents... BUt I think most of them are girls... I can't figure out why (on this site anyway) I wonder about the world... Hmm.... *wonders* ...

.... was this phroe person a male or female or type C? *realizes how off topic I have gotten*

Read the signature honey, read the signature. ... Odd, that last line was the same as your signature... AHH WARN SOMEBODY ELSE ABOUT THIS!!!

Should I add in a line where I then state what I mean by a ball is not a ball anymore, and then go with the italitcs? *hugs back* Aww, ...

Whoa... when you really think about it, that's the most confusing thing .... Should choice C on the site be... not chosing the gender Icon and then being assumed as... ...

I am not the vocabulary queen Nor am I the spelling bee And definitely not the grammar police I - - I write from heart My words rhyme with the ...

This is pretty damn scary. It would have had a better effect without all the rhyming. The word Baby annoys me... I like the entire plotline but not the words... ...

Xanthan: come on girl, live with it! FREEDOM OF POST!!! :P I liked this, cute though... Weird Al is humerous, and would enjoy this poem... if I thought he had ...

YWS is not equal to America. Or any official government for that matter. Technically, it has the right to take away any of your rights that it wants to, as ...

I have just come to realize and wonder about the gender of many of the new writers I've seen. I believe I posted in 2 that were female today and ...