Elizabeth

This has to be one of the most exciting stories I've ever read in my life! Let me fix the grammar however One time my neighbor (Will) came over and ...

Too short. Too forced. Too confusing. AROO! You need to capitalize that I.... yeah.... heh.

You should really space out the paragraphs... After the first sentence, you need a comma after realistic and the ". Mr should have a . after it. Mr. But this ...

When I became a member of deviantArt, I was planning it to be "Warthog In A King Prawn Suit." The same as the writer's club I used to go to. ...

The last random pic needs pants :P I like them though, I like this entire idea. She's a pretty neat character. Keep drawing Bobo *huggles* *Has never huggled an artist* ...

Logic once killed Pat Buchanan... He's now dead. A dead random firefighting man. Pat Buchanan everybody.

Malik, yes, it's a last name. Means King. There's a lot on as I mentioned too.

Gal: Samuel Beckett (them points is going to go towards my contest) Once upon a time I ate a hamburger and then it killed me and then kiddnapped.... kids.... stuff.

has a lot of arabic names. Just remember, when you introduce people, it's last name before first name. So I would be Mathers Elizabeth. I sort of realized that about ...

I had to re-read this agin... wow... it's been a while. But yeah, considering I'm entering High School this is pretty much what I don't want to happen but might ...

"when I played The mommy and you played The daddy" It seems to me The shouldn't be capitalized but Mommy and Daddy should, but I'm not sure on this... or ...

*Wow Wow WOW* I saw something WOW worthy :P Not much WOW's Me Believe me.

The Black Rose : Nothing generally... deep or meaningful to that... My name Elizabeth is Hebrew though... (YUCKS)

hee hee.... beetle.

I love your art. the one under the wolf is how I draw... a lot of my designs have similar swirls and such. Nice work :)