Elizabeth

There might be a chance once I get the long enough attention span! Hmm... Yeah, I'll try and get back to that as soon as I can but I have ...

i loved this poem... i can't say you need to improve because right now i'm caring for a robot baby but i'll be sure to comment more thouroughly later. I ...

short, simple, scared me... Man I'm so tired.... *YAWNS* Simple... it's a pretty song... *zzzzz*

Whoa man, so much repitition can only do so much man. I don't really know what to say.... Just, don't repeat stuff much... Deep man... *YAWNS* Alas, my baby cries...

April “So,” the smoky figure rasped, “we have a deal?” The girl shuddered in her tight Levi jeans as she waited for the cross light to turn green or for ...

I LOVE YOU *mourns* So glad you're back :)

It's sexi, Make one more for me :p

Eclipse rocks, I'm going to put it up as mine if you dont' mind. It's flattery, and it's beautiful.

Squid is awesome.... I vote a combo of Monkey and Squid lol.... MID!

I hope my children don't do that.... Oh God! *Erases Ebay password.* Slick Jimmy -- beautiful response... that's beautiful. lol.

I like it... but the thing is this flower is something kids to do just get out of taking notes... Not something I'd call art, but then again my flowers ...

Chocolate Rapper Yo, aight, ya’ll hear what I’m sayin’? HERSHE-E-E-EYS I-S-S-S D-AAAA BOMB! Ok, so git it straight You goin’ on a date? I don’t mean, floosies, clubbin’ beers, an’ ...

Not lengthy enough... I mean, honestly, it's not something you should change, but I've read a ton of poems and somehow the word "blood and ink" are getting cliche... but ...

EXPRESSION!

................................. Ahh.... Um... Wow... Nobody is really dead... are they?! I mean... dead people... scare me sort of. I liked this... I liked the first two lines but then after ...