Elizabeth

Hmm... First line was too long... You used the word like a bit too much. This seems a bit too... depressing. I liked the end. Hmm... shorten first line, get ...

*Laughs* I remember when that happened.... I remember....

I think every ex soldier has seriously feelings like this... War is not fun.... I liked this a lot... I really did, it was a graet poem with great wording ...

You make me sad... Boo hoo... I'm going to be one of those people who take a picture of myself everyday for 3 years and then put it together and ...

Well, too bad for you, unless you find a way to shrink the filesize without pixellizing your face :P *sneets* it's already pixelly and the bottom part of the border ...

Artist: Sleeping Beauty Lyrics Song: Once Upon A Dream Lyrics I know you I walked with you once upon a dream. I know you The gleam in your eyes is ...

Augh, wisdom comes in all forms lol... I'm not genreally religious (babtized catholic) so... yeah... Congradulations :) I'm totally adding you to my MSN hee hee, if that's alright. *Likes ...

Heh good luck to you here :) Interesting name, where does it orginate? Heh... I wish I had some cats and a dog to mother, but I have a rabbit ...

Jeez.... I didn't start kindergarten until I was 5 and 10 months.... because my birthday is in November and parent's didn't want me starting until I was 5 *grumbles* so ...

So THAT'S what you look like Wiggy! Now I know who's reading my blog... you stalker you :) Haven't many recent of me... I'll give it a shot. Me like ...

... bit morbid... I think that you told more than explained... this didn't leave much to the imagination... and... yeah... I think that it's just a bit too creepy for ...

Alright you did get rid of the question marks and fixed the spelling but there's a bit more... let me show you what the first stanza could be... this is ...

Lieing is spelt lying I'm and I... Alright, um... I did like this but... DID YOU EVER THINK? that the question mark doesn't belong right there? I can't really say ...

Alwyas got it, always will. :) Unless the account breaks, then I'll warn you.

you were mean about mine but I'm not one to hold grudges... it wasmediocre. Powerful imagery and stuff. That's not holding a grudge? lol...