Elizabeth

Trust me I've read most of your poems, they are not terrible or anything, and I hope I didn't say they were. there is just some things that I'd expect ...

What is wrong with peoples' vocabulary words? Go to or something, jeez *sighs* It's basically a compliment of Yoha and Pandora... only you need to make it waaay better than ...

... I'm not trying to be ignorant or anything but I don't celebrate Halloween... it's forced upon me by friends... It's cute but I don't like it.

This creeped me out... In a good way heh.... I think you used the word cross too many times in those two lines lol... start crossed, heart crossed, across a ...

AUGH LOOK OUT! Heh you sketch better than I do, I'm so lame and un talented :P heh.

There was something that I liked... it was that 2-2 then the other line format... I liked that... I liked the words in this but they were still a bit ...

... this... was sort of scary... I don't know. Maybe I'm being stupid but the part with "Grandmother is young... a smile without teeth." ... hmm... I'm like, pre-mature tooth ...

... I disliked this I mean it I'm sorry I'm kinda sorry I don't like this like you do and I'm sorry I am being a burden by letting you ...

Hmm... shouldn't your name be awesomewriter And shouldn't this be an awesome writing? ... ... ... I, seriously, did not like this poem... I mean... I don't know, the lines ...

I'll summarize what I read. The intro. And that... needed so many punctuation fixings... I wrot elike this when either I'm in a hurry and they're only notes or when ...

Was Madam Mim from the Sword in the Stone? She looks very familiar but I can't put my finger on it... I really liked them all, no favourites really :)

THE GRUDGE 2 WAS SOME DISTURBING CRAP! I'm serious... I mean like 12 people died but, it's like, so what? There was no ending and there isn't a 3rd one... ...

That's a lotta shit :P Not the avvies, but the word. Jeez, I'm funny! HAHA... LISTEN TO ME! These are absolutely awesome... I don't know who this Sharpe guy is ...

I lived in 6 generations of sims once... i even had 1 sim adopt all her kids and branched a few of them off as well... I married Johnny off ...

Oui! J'amie the! What's a parsnip? (O_O)