Eliza:)

I'll try not to repeat what the others have said. In Greek History, one poet made such an impact as to change the very nature of Greek religion. Try rearranging ...

One of those comedy books. ...

This whole Lent season… what’s it to me? I’ve “lent” so much, I thought I was dead. I lost my voice, my last resort. I’m mute. My thoughts come forward ...

his hot blood running down my throat "Hot" doesn't need to be in the sentence. I knew he knew I was there. The first "I knew" doesn't need to be ...

Kyrstin stood against the firm brick wall. "Firm" doesn't need to be in the sentence. The sun rained down on her as she waited for the first bell to ring. ...

Card is such a good reader. I'm definitely buying Enchantment next time I go to the bookstore.

Overall, your picture is pretty good. The shading is good, and the dragon looks good. The main problem is the princess. The arm doesn't look right. The thumb is too ...

There aren't many things that need to be corrected in your story. In the event of a continuum quake the first and most important rule is to panic without abandon. ...

I agree with MeadowLark about the brightness. If the sun was higher when you took the picture, it would look better. Other than that, it is a pretty good photo.

chipsandguacamollie makes me think of my sister. She has troubles spelling, capitalizing, and spacing words. It also reminds me of some Mexican guy. Eliza:)

Short stories are much better than poetry. I'm horrible at poetry. Short stories give you more writing skills and are funner to actually write because you can make a plot ...

As such, I do not actually believe that there is a purpose to any form of Life, including Humankind. "Actually" doesn't need to be in the sentence. though I don't ...

Now that that's done with, what kind of genres do you prefer to write in? I usually write science fiction, but sometimes I write fantasy too.

She's just looking out at the stars. Forgotten in her left hand, a light-stylus glows a forlorn green. I clear my throat. "Excuse me." "Oh!" Her hand goes to her ...

Hi everyone! My name is Eliza, and am thirteen years old. My favorite author is Olsen Scott Card, and my favorite book is Ender Game. I love write (obviously) and ...