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Do I, or do I not? A classic question, really. Does she or does she not? Something that's haunted me for years. Will I, or will I not? Quit talking ...

At the beginning of the novel Chayton, a Native American veterinarian, finds his mate, Keaton, a blonde haired Caucasian teacher. There should be a comma after "Chayton." Otherwise, it sounds ...

On our land we had a huge barn. You used "land" in the last sentence. Use another word. The barn contained nothing except my dad’s power tools and the dog ...

Eddie woke up feeling miserable and sore after a long night in the tent set up on the beach for the wounded. This sentence is too long. Eddie started to ...

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Long minutes passed, with no sound from above or any conversation between the two of them. Who are "them?" Aela kept glancing at the boy, taking note of his small ...

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I either started writing in first grade or sixth grade, depending on how you consider it. The first story I wrote was in first grade (which means I was six ...

It was the 21st of July, 1994. Did you mess up the date? It was his favourite. "Favourite" is spelled "favorite." but it was his favourite none the less. Once ...

The essay doesn't have a lot of mistakes. :smt038 So cute and cuddly that many a rational person has made the impulsive decision to bring one home, a few hundred ...

Stars. I like stars. Love, adore, want to eat etc. "Love to eat" doesn't fit with the rest of the sentence. I mean the ones shining bright at night, glancing ...

If alcohol was illegal, there wouldn't be a problem.

I was extremely nervous but I kept telling myself that it would be easy, and all I needed to do was ask and get it over with, and the worst ...

People always told me that you only get one life, so don't screw it up, however, I had screwed mine up beyond repair. This could be separated into two sentences. ...

Published author and high school freshman Asher Edelson sits at his laptop, and gets ready to start his family history book. There should be commas before Asher and after Edelson. ...