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Oh m got I hate Times New Roman. Is there a way to set your default font? so I can change it daily? If you go to the font dialog ...

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She was a plump young woman with a sweet heart. She had light brown hair and dark brown eyes. She was a stay at home mom. But still worked hard. ...

It was a stupid thing I was doing. This sentence would sound better if you reword it. But sometimes how you feel about someone else can rule you, and take ...

A windy whistle from behind me catches me of guard It should be "off" not "of." I manage to screech. You used the word "screech" already in this story. If ...

Percy Jackson and the Olympians is such a great series. I can't wait for May when the fifth book finally comes out. It is so good.

"So don't wait for someone to tell you its too late, because these are the best days. There's always something tommorrow so I say let's make the best of tonight. ...

Why I want to hand you my life on a platter and feed it to you with a fork. This sentence doesn't have a subject. Why I feel the urge ...

i stood Capitalize I. on the threshhold Threshhold is spelled threshold. he had his back turned to me. Capitalize he. i was angry. something i cant even remember... Capitalize I ...

It is okay, but it really doesn't make sense. Someone knows they're going to die, but they have to wait, yet they have to warn him with her death so ...

Computers don’t breath at intervals. This sentence doesn't have anything to do with the rest of the story. I see a slate-grey house Grey is spelled gray. a dandelion in ...

Ninjas are much better. They actually have to have some training and doesn't get drunk every other day and smell like pigs. Pirates are just the opposite of ninjas and ...

As my black peep toed heels There should be a comma after black, peep, and toed. the infamous Youth Training Centre Centre should be spelled center. However, those were not ...

This is because we are drawn too misery instinctively, as a topic of interest. "Too" should be "to." Why did the members of the nazi party beleive this insane "Nazi" ...

A look of terror grew over his face. Why does he suddenly become frightened? The cutthroat's intimidating, slow stride accompanied him to the counter. "Accompanied" doesn't seem like the right ...