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In the land of Internet, the Viruses were once again preparing for battle. Years had gone by since the war began, and generations had come and gone, but there was ...

This is an entry for Clo's Unfortunate Incident Contest. The prompt I used was number 11: outcome. This is also the first chapter of a story I am writing. Melissa ...

Granted, but Anthony Keidis begins writing songs that sound like they were written in first grade. I wish my writing was better.

Thanks, Rosey Unicorn. All the advice was great. The animals will hopefully be less human like in the next draft. I never noticed how the second daydream blended with the ...

“You’re still going to call me and stuff right?” asked Julia. There should be a comma after stuff. Julia and Samantha were two girls who were different but the alike ...

Would you review my prologue, Disaster, in the Fantasy Section please?

Would you please review my prologue, Disaster?

Could you review my prologue in the Fantasy section please?

Thanks for your critiques everyone. I'll add more description next time.

This is the prologue of a story I'm writing. “I can’t, Java; it wouldn’t be right,” Mike sighed. When Java arrived, his features had turned weak and brittle as he ...

A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would later be France, as the ...

A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would later be France, as the ...

A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would later be France, as the ...

A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would later be France, as the ...

A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would later be France, as the ...