EliteHusky

Meeting the Medici David entered the fully furnished mansion carrying his sedated brother in both arms. He used his back to push the armoured front door shut before gently placing ...

I found this very passionate. The title corresponded to the theme which I found to be extremely helpful. The language is short but sweet, and leaves you wanting a bit ...

Very interesting. The overall format of this story was quite new to me. I liked how you described the actions of Hanna's father after dialogue and how you made him ...

Prologue In a small Italian region surrounded by lush rural farmland bordered by forests within Tuscany, a 2008 Maserati GranTurismo silently broke free of the foliage and drove past two ...

Firstly, let me say that I read your preface but continued reading anyway. I found the dialogue interesting to say the least. You obviously have an interest in writing and ...

Very well written and I believe in its potential to expand. Your transitions were done smoothly with excellent dialogue. Here is my favourite piece of dialogue which transcended the back-lit ...

This is rich in terms of content, but at the same time it feels very scattered. There is repetition, and while I understand it is part of the plot, there ...

I seldom say this to an online post, but I genuinely thought this was beautiful. Your chapter flowed incredibly smoothly with one piece of dialogue making me think twice about ...

Greetings and sorry for late answer to your request. University has held by attention for the Spring. I believe you have developed a good storyline. Ultimately the only aspects which ...

I like this. It is very original, and has a hint of personality to give it that extra 'boost'. My mum always told me life it like a trampoline, some ...

Timothy woke up before the sun emerged over the little town on Tirt. He lived by himself in a one-storey building he had inherited after his father was killed in ...

Very good! As a male reader, who is not really interested in romance stories, I found this piece captured my interest throughout. The writing style was flawed at times, such ...

Beautiful! Please specify. Sincerely, -Elitehusky

Okay. One aspect of this submission I would change would be the word "dieing" to "dying". You saved my life from a prison of endless self pity and gave me ...

Good photograph. Unlike literary pieces, writing a review for a photograph is significantly more difficult as it is largely based on a question of taste and less on the layout, ...