EliteHusky

Firstly, you have a very strong ending. When writing closing the story can be the toughest part but I liked what you did involving the dialogue between the main character ...

Working backwards let me start off by congratulating you on successfully, in my own interpretation at least, pulling off the "it was all a dream" move. The characters are likeable. ...

The critical aspect of this piece that I enjoyed was the smoothness in transition from the beginning to the end. It was like following a very short but energy-packed story ...

I believe this is good. What I liked most was the lack of 'flowerly' language and in avoiding that, interpretation was easier for the reader. The conclusion does not disappoint ...

Is balance an issue of weight or the absence of… Very good. I enjoyed your interpretative poem. The Harry Potter addition was slightly humorous as it appeared to have originated ...

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“Stephanie? Steph?” it was William, her ex-boyfriend and her best friend. I liked the dialogue throughout this piece. Shortening Stephanie to Steph helped to personify William as being real and ...

Very interesting. The poem was scattered at times, even mentioning soldiers at one point, but I felt this best captured the atmosphere of confusion which is littered in the title. ...

One Week Later Anton and Lindsay sat listening to David’s music. The stereo blasted nineties pop songs throughout the entire first floor of the mansion. David stared into a mirror ...

While grammar is an issue, as pointed out. I believe it is worth stressing that the content was very interesting and did sustain my interest. Overall a re-reading this for ...

I love this. The goat is a very lovable character! The fact that it is non-fiction adds that certain charm to know that these events actually happened. The beginning was ...

Thank you for your comment. This chapter is almost impossible to understand without first reading the Prologue and following chapters in order. If you think of it as a novel, ...

Powerful words. Example: All masks are on,at this masquerade.This ball full of secrets,and hidden shame. Additionally, I enjoyed the rhymes you provided such as, My mask hides the lies, that ...

It often becomes challenging to interpret lyrics without the melody or pace of the song but the title of this piece caught my attention. What kept me reading was your ...

Bad Blood Dante washed his face thoroughly as David used the second of the two fountains in his bathroom. “You two finished in there?” Lindsay called from outside. Anton entered ...