EliteHusky

I am not a Poetry Expert but I really liked the fact that it rhymed yet made sense. I found also found it cheerful instead of the usual poetry people ...

I'm not a big fan of Ramantic Fiction but despite that and the fact the chapters were a bit lengthy, you did a resonably well job explaining the details which ...

Falice and Markov travelled north through the damp grass until they soon saw a wooden building ahead of them. “This place better be worth my time Markov,” Falice warned calmly, ...

Thomas gave Charlie, who was now shivering ferociously, his dark green jacket. They were crouching uncomfortably on the seats in the plane to protect Charlie from getting more soaked from ...

I think you knew what you are doing when you were writing this story but here are some suggestions. Break it up. The solid sentences one after the other is ...

It really grabbed my attention and appealed to me just by it's size. I was surprised how wonderful the poetry just drifted along the entire piece and did not loom ...

When I read this through it sounded awfully like a dream that was written down on paper with more detail. It is very unpredictable and while that may appear as ...

This is quite interesting and somewhat appealing. I would recommend that you use Times New Roman (default) font and ans the previous comment said, just write it instead of hosting ...

You can really visualize what you're writing in this poem, the only possible bit that I was a caught on was the use of a question mark which I do ...

It was short but sweet and the rhyming was creative, keep up the good work! -Elitehusky

Like the other replies the first half was really innovative and poetic however as it continued it just seemed to drift too far apart losing my interest and didn't quite ...

The water became unpleasantly cold as the wind blew through some of the broken windows. Thomas knew instantly that the plane had crashed. He was still strapped in his seat ...

Thomas woke up at the Bucklins' house to the sound of rapping on the bedroom door. “Are you awake inside there Thomas!?” Charlie had obviously had more sleep despite heading ...

Thomas had agreed to help William pick up Mr. Bucklin’s very expensive “Travel Set” at Gimico’s Travel, which he had been told was a place where travel arrangements could be ...

Falice Woodsworth woke up to a burning sensation across his face. He was lying on his back, simply floating on the water surrounding him and by the looks of the ...