EliteHusky

“Where are you taking me.” Thomas coughed, shivering slightly. He still recalled the frigid cold water he was in only moments before. Igor tightened his grip on his shoulder as ...

Fantastic "fairy art". I really like the wavy lines used in the first image and it with the following image really portrayed the emotions on the faces. However the third ...

I really enjoyed that part even though I had not read the first part. Despite the story's somewhat gloomy atmosphere concerning death, I found humour. That is a good thing ...

I happen to know a bit about of history about the Templars and based on your poem, so do you. I really liked how you took a part of controversial ...

Honestly, as I was reading that piece I just kept thinking to myself "those are a lot of wishes." This is so hard for me to criticize because quite frankly ...

Wow, that was a good poem, although at some parts I found myself halting a bit to get synchronized in it's rhythm. An old forgotten memory A musty faded dream ...

I thought that this piece was good. Here's why, I really liked this effect: If her grandmother cared at all—if she didn’t want Zoe to catch pneumonia and die—she would ...

“Like my wand, it’s very pointy.” Charlie bragged as he brandished it towards Thomas. “That, is a stick,” he retorted as Charlie instantly dropped his smug expression. Mr. Bucklin cleared ...

Dear Fangala the Flying Feline, I was honestly very surprised by that poem. I am not a poetry expert but I really like poems that include weather, especially rain. The ...

I can't wait to find out what happened to Maria. I point to the lapel of her blouse Possibly, I said pointing to the lapel of her blouse. *Said could ...

Wow. You've certainly made this piece quite clear although I did find myself stumbling early on in the first paragraph with the structure it was in, present tense. It seems ...

"Can you swim?” Igor yelled over the sound of crashing waves against the side of the plane as Thomas and Charlie clasped to the edges of the window and sheltered ...

Madison looked away for a moment then back at David Cain. Maybe: Madison looked away for moment then turned her head to face him. It just seems that story was ...

Complex... yet really good. This is so hard for me to review because I absolutely love the poem (if it's not a poem I'm terribly sorry, I've made that mistake, ...

That seems going around in crops of circles I like that! Hmmm.... I'm not sure if that was necessary but it did somewhat help to the atmosphere which complements the ...