EliteHusky

Great Poem. As I read it I could not help but imagine U2's "Get Your Boots On" as a soundtrack for your verses. Although since it is poetry it's potential ...

Since this task is rather based on the individual I'd rather not critique this piece, however I will provide you with feedback saying that it is pretty neat and I ...

Good use of dialogue but for this part, I heard a rustling in the bushes.Could it be a werewolf? I found that a bit too prophetic, in terms of revealing ...

Your last line really caught me by surprise! As for a preface I think you have certainly provided enough "bait" although I felt that it would strongly attract female readers ...

Fairly good poem. I think the emphasis on key parts definitely transmitted to the reader but I think you can biuld upon it. Being fairly solid with the exception of ...

Good start. The storyline is intriguing to say the least but there are some parts which made hesitate as they might not have blended completely. when they spoke it caused ...

The lighthouse that imprinted itself onto the Isle of Man was shining as usual for the ships to see. The sky had darkened significantly as the time slowly returned to ...

This piece of poetry was really well constructed. I liked how you used your character's viewpoint(s) to channel the, english language in your favour. That last bit sounds unusual but ...

This story just pulled me right in! The beginning was similar to a maze in terms of vocabularly. You mentioned a cobblestone road, an erie setting with a young boy ...

A very intriguing story to say the least. The overall theme of crime and justice (in a sense), is not one of my favourite reading topics but regardless, the quality ...

Great poem. Very unique and innovative vocabulary, such as using an alleyway to capture an atmosphere of bleakness, darkness, and as you put it, blindness. Now I am a strong ...

Greetings, Overall this piece had quite a few punctuation errors which somewhat seemed to cover the essence of the story you were trying to convey. The beginning was very interesting, ...

Rain pummelled against Thomas’s face as he walked up the staircase leading to the ship’s deck. He had been on the Hungarian vessel for slightly over a day and presumed ...

I usually shy away from tragic stories but as I continued to read it completely I thought that id carried some insight. He was going to bury himself alive with ...

Falice adjusted his silk-white mask as he lay on the inn’s bed. His fingers riddled against the curves he had created to replace his torn face. “Markov!” he called as ...