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Re: Should he love her before college? Or 4 years are too much?
Why not? A lot of couples are together for that period of time, some much longer, before they get engaged! I don't think it's boring at all. In fact, I ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Soulless [Main Character]
Hi there! So, this is an interesting picture. I wonder, is the paper brown like that it the lighting of the room that you're in? I wonder because the color ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Did Someone Call for a Reviewer? (Closed)
All finished, Lumi! Who is next?
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Ivy Rose
Lumi! Hi! Thanks much for the request. :) It was a real pleasure reading this. Have you ever heard the song "It's All Coming Back to Me Now" by Celine ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Did Someone Call for a Reviewer? (Closed)
All done at last, guys! Who's next?
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Artful Creatures Chapter 1
Hello, Tedus! Here I am at last to review this piece! I am incredibly sorry that this took so long, but I am here now. So, I pretty much agree ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Powerless
Hi! Thanks for the request. :) So! I think you have some good stuff in here. The flow and rhythm were nice -- they were simple enough that the reader ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: One Country, Two Worlds part 2
Hi! It's me again. :) So, I read this second part and I think that you do a good job continuing the threads you began in the first part. I ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: One Country, Two Worlds [Part 1]
Hi there! Here as requested. So, I like this story a lot and I hope you do well with it in school -- it has a lot of good stuff ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Back Home
Shadow -- yep, it's the moon. I had thought that I had made it fairly obvious and I was hoping to get by the story without naming where he was ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Back Home
This world is very different from my own; I sensed it from the minute I set foot here. The ground is gray, jagged, the sky an endless black sheet dotted ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Mirror World (Contest Entry)
Hi, Tiger! Here I am to review -- thanks for the request! You've already gotten a lot of good feedback on this story already, so I'm not going to drone ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Ephemeral Girl
Hello, Persephoneia! Here I am to review your poem. Sorry this took so long -- I'm not great at reviewing poetry, but I shall try my absolute best. Anyhoo! I ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: New Sherlock Holmes Novel
Ooh! I absolutely adore the Alex Rider series, and I've read a tiny section of the Hound of the Baskervilles as well as seen a BBC movie adaptation of it. ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Zdravstvuj, Comrades, how do you do?
Hello, Ashleigh! Welcome to YWS. I'm Ellie! I like how you spell your name! I've never seen it spelled like that before -- it's unique, which is always cool when ...
Jan 18, 2011
