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Hi, Cannon! I'm here. So, this story has some nice parts to it, and I love how you wrote this story with a character who is mentally unstable -- that's ...

Hi, Da! So, these pictures are all incredibly cute -- there's something about me that adores animals, especially dogs. Although, when they're you're pets, they can start to get on ...

This is so cool! Being #19 was a nice surprise. :) Thanks for this, Nate!

AN: This is basically an expansion of this poem. Tell me what you think -- the sparsity of the dialogue is on purpose. The night is frigid; a mixture of ...

Pengu! I cannot begin to tell you how beautiful this poem is. I've read a lot of your poetry in the past but haven't ever gotten around to reviewing it, ...

Hi, It wouldn't hurt to clean up the structure of this poem. You have some nice images here, but the lines are too long and there are a lot of ...

Hey, Raz! I don't have much experience reviewing lyrics, and I don't want to be too repetitive of the other reviews, so bear with me. I thought this was really ...

Six done for me so far -- I'm going to try to fit in one more before the day is over.

Done!

Hey, daydreamer. :) Sorry this took a bit longer, but I got really tired and left to take a nap -- I'm here now though. This was a good ending ...

Hello again daydreamer! Say, I really do enjoy how this story is progressing as a whole. In general, you have a good sense of character and suspense, and you know ...

Dun dun dun! It's me again. So, here the pace of the story starts to pick up and we get into the fire, and now there is tension and conflict ...

Okay! I would say that this is definitely an interesting concept. I've always loved historical fiction stories, and it's nice that you picked something that is, while still deeply tragic ...

Hi, Story! Thanks for the request. You've gotten some really good critiques on this piece so far and I don't want to be too repetitive, so this will be a ...

Could you review this for me, please? If you want to review the second chapter as well when you're done, go ahead, but I'm only asking you do this one ...