Elinor

Write a sonnet describing two people who are having a picnic in a park.

This has been edited! In light of Valentine's Day it would be nice if I could get some fresh feedback. :) Thanks to everyone who commented on this, all of ...

Stori, This is an interesting an unique concept, and I like the voice that you're able to create for the diamond. However, this is way too short a story to ...

Hi Heather! So, I think is the first time I've ever read or reviewed something of yours, and I will say, your writing is a pleasure to read. You have ...

I don't know what happened here, but I think all the little icons on the site crashed on me, but I can still view avatars: I tried refreshing a couple ...

Hi Flemzo! So, I promised that I would take a look at this to you in chat -- and now I have. Apologies for getting to this so late, but ...

Hi Skins! Here I am as promised. So, I'm glad you put that list up there! It's really helpful. This review is going to be short as I don't really ...

Hi Skins! Yay, I'm so glad I finally got to this part. This was good as always, and I'm glad that Charlie and Zoey finally met -- I've been waiting ...

Hi! I'm here. :)

Oh dear, it's you -- you're looking marvelous today your hair is knotted because you forgot to comb it, and your clothes aren't clean -- you wore them out on ...

Kitty15 helped me a lot in the writing of this article. Welcome to the Advanced Critiques forum! So you may be wondering why would I use this forum? What's the ...

These are two pictures of perfume that I took in the spirit of Valentines Day which is coming soon. I'm rather proud of these, but still, please rip them to ...

This really goes for anything, the best way to learn and improve something (and poetry is no exception) is through practice. If you write a poem and receive critiques, you'll ...

I think it sounds like an awesome idea, Nate. :) I'll try hard to see if I can donate -- I don't know if I would be able to, but ...

Jash, I PMed you regarding your review. Perse, yours is done, but for now I am closing this since I've gotten to be a bit busy.