Elinor

Alright, so! You've got some interesting stuff here! I like how you set up the story to be somewhat like the typical hero-wins-against-all-odds sports movie, yet you've chosen an activity ...

Your cat is adorable, Rosey - and you are quite pretty yourself. :)

When I came out of the locker room, I expected to be the first one there so I'd have the whole pool to myself, at least for a few minutes, ...

Hi, Tayler! So, this is a neat little short story. It's structured well, and the prose as well as the characterization is solid throughout. It's grammatically sound, showing that you ...

I nominated Razcoon and JabberHut cause they're awesome and always fun to talk to.

Can't wait to start this- added a picture for Erin. :)

Name: Erin Crane Age: 15 Gender: Female District: 4 Appearance/Picture: Erin is has a rather small frame, weighing about 125 pounds at a height of 5 feet, five inches. She ...

Thanks, guys! I'll definitely work on expanding this. Dudette - he's not really alive again. She's just hallucinating that he is.

May 27th They just called my cell phone, told me news that I’d never, in a million, trillion years, ever want to or imagine that I would have to face. ...

I love to write because I love to create. I love to think of situations and characters in my head and bring them to life both for me and for ...

Hi there! So, this was an interesting little piece. You definitely know what you were writing about and didn't just do it on a whim, and I think the fear ...

Hi, Syn! So, I really thought that this piece was well-written and that you did a marvelous job with it. I like that it's very simplistic yet still very compelling; ...

Hi there, Story! Here I am, as requested! I apologize for the delay. I thought this was nicely thought out, and I can tell that it means a lot to ...

Hi, Skins! So, I don't really have much to say about this chapter, so this is going to be a brief comment. You've gotten some good advice so far, and ...

AN: I submitted this for a school assignment back in November, but now I'm starting to look at it again because I was thinking of expanding this into a longer ...