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Are we just speaking about romantic love, or love in general? If it's the latter, I love my brother, I love my parents, I love my cousin, I love my ...

Erin The minutes following Marco's arrival at their little camp had passed by rather quickly. She was about to say something, offer him a piece of rabbit, see what supplies ...

April 7th - Dorothy In Kansas she was lonely, she was scared, timid. She, with all her heart, sings of her dreamland. It comes to her like clockwork, but isn't ...

Well, I always say I'm waiting for my Romeo/Prince Charming, but I use those words to describe my ideal vision of a guy -- it's different for everyone, I think. ...

Hi, Pea! So, I don't usually do line by line, but since this is for a school assignment, I'm thinking that your teacher wants the grammar and such polished/structure at ...

Hi! So, I just had a few quick comments! I really like what you're trying to do here, but this needs a lot more detail and description for this to ...

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April 6th - Spring One day, things will change -- they will glitter, shine. The dark brown branches, dead with winter's frost will be alive with the pink buds of ...

Hi, Ashley! So, I was in need of something to review, and I thought that I would give this a look! It's definitely an interesting story and you have the ...

Hi, Idraax and Tenyo! I'm here, as requested. I just had a few quick comments! So, this was an interesting little poem, and it conjures up vivid and surreal images ...

Mike, I know that you're gone and that you won't ever read this. I also know that I'm not ever going to show it to anyone else. So, why then, ...

Sam! I know I've told you how much I love your drawings, but I don't think I can stress it enough. You are a wonderful artist, and even though I ...

Hi, Heather and Matt! Thought I'd drop by and give this a quick review. I will say that I like this a lot; I was confident in the poem that ...

April 4th - Please be there Something told me you'd be there, waiting with your arms wide, waiting to hear my secrets and collect my tears. I can tell you ...

April 3rd - oh, you There was a time, years ago, when we laughed, for innocence had overtook us. I remember the countless summer days together, when we had nothing ...