Elinor

Chamoile - Persephoneia Too much honey again - the golden liquid swirls in clumps, and a little drips down the edge. I sigh and take a sip, too hot and ...

I figured this would be cool to post on a hot day like today -- this was day five's NaPo for me, but I like it a lot and I ...

Hi there. :) So, this was sweet, but like dregy said, it didn't exactly muster any emotion, or at least the emotion that it could have should you have gone ...

Hi inkwell, I think that this a really cool piece. I have to wonder, is this free verse or does it carry any sort of specific structure? It seems like ...

Hi, Luna! So, I like this a lot. You got a cool idea, and like how this is simplistic yet you manage to get across a lot. This has a ...

Hi, Princess! So, you have a neat concept, but right now, your poem is just that; a concept. It's very skeleton-like in the sense that there's not a lot of ...

Hi, Ninja! So, this was a really interesting story. I like how it's simple and to the point, and it doesn't waste excess time describing emotions that you already nail ...

April 10th - Performance Dancing, hopelessly - a beautiful bird takes her last stand she is a princess cast in a spell her one hope, forsaken. She falls in a ...

Hi, You did a good job with these. I love the atmosphere, I love the subjects, and it's just cool how everything pieces together. I don't know what I can ...

Thomas. Hate him. Maybe by some miracle we'd become friends, but I doubt it. ~ Lisa What's your favorite flavor of ice cream?

Name: El Gender: Female Star sign: Leo Eye color: Brown Clothing style: Casual but girly Hair color: Blonde Hair style: Shoulder length, straight Other: Annie and I are sisters? * ...

Hey, Evi. :) Since you were kind enough to review my short story, I thought that I would drop by and give this a quick review. Overall, this is a ...

Hi there, ehte! So, I like these drawings a lot -- they're cute. I'm jealous that you can draw cartoon like things convincingly. You seem to have the basic idea ...

April 9th - Sunrise A touch of gold in the sky Birds of many colors sing their hearts out coffee shops open their doors whether you like it or not; ...

April 8th - Reflections I sit alone underneath the cherry tree where you first kissed me on that summer day so long ago. Times were hard then, and we, with ...