Elinor

Okay! So, hi! I just had a few quick comments. This was alright; it's certainly not awful by any standards. However, I still think that there is so, so much ...

April 24 - Him his arms, up on a cross - ragged cloths around his torn flesh thorns scratching into his skull, he mutters a prayer to his father. he ...

Hi there! So, this was a really neat short story. You had a powerful atmosphere and were able to convey your image well. Your use of second person was excellent ...

Hi! This was an interesting piece to read; did you base it off of Black Swan, by any chance? Love that movie. Anyway, you seem to have pretty solid ideas ...

April 23 - untitled (Okay, so technically these are lyrics, and I did get a lot of help from Razcoon with this one!) When I was very young they told ...

Spot saved for a female ghost - profile will be up later.

April 22 - Water I see it in my sleep, I see it in the day; my throat, cracked, longs for it -- but there's none, it's only in my ...

Can you look at this short story for me? Thanks so much!

Erin Erin bit her lip and managed a smile as she started to prepare their meal. She picked out spaghetti and meatballs, two cups of iced tea, and brownies. Just ...

Today you look particularly exhausted when I pick you up from the ice rink. You have your bag over your arm and are sipping the orange gatorade that you always ...

April 21 - the figure skater effortlessly, gracefully - she floats across the ice while the spotlight trails behind her - she is alone on her massive stage; it is ...

Erin Her first moments of regained consciousness were a blur. She saw the sun, the sand, the green of the trees and the blue of the water. She also felt ...

April 20 - drafted It was a Tuesday when you told me -- called me, asked me to make coffee. My kids were off at school, and I hadn't seen ...

April 19 - the road I was confronted with a road an icy road, jagged, laced with thorns- it was on a cliff side and one slip would send you ...

April 18 - a sparkle in the sky I remember that day; a sparkle appeared in the sky so blackened with fog. And I watched it, holding my breath, biting ...