Elinor

Erin After Ara jutted off, Erin still lay on the sand for several moments longer, in a daze. One minute she was fighting the girl, fearing for her own life, ...

April 29 - Hang on tight it seemed like the end, and you said no more. You'd had enough anguish; it only got worse. You beat yourself down until there ...

April 28 - the rosebud it is just a rosebud but somehow, it is more enchanting, more promising then the others -- I see it in more beauty, more promise ...

Erin It was all a blur. Although a lot had happened in the past however-long-they'd-been-there, and there had been many life-or-death situations that Erin had to overcome, this was the ...

April 27 - lost, scared and alone (okay, so I said I would only write one haiku, but I am feeling no inspiration, so I am just doing three and ...

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April 26 - spring The ice has melted and now the world is green, etched with pastel. She comes up, nearly blinded by the light and a porcelain smile is ...

Hi! Um, so as this stands, this is kind of jumbled. You're trying to pack a lot into such a short space of time, and it really feels confusing when ...

Hi! So, this was a very cute poem, and it made me smile. I think any kind of writer (regardless of what type) can relate to it. It's an easy ...

April 25 - the swan she sings, sweetly outstretches her silken wings for all to see. Against the steady current of a lake she glides like a feather showing her ...

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Ooh, interesting! This is really short, so I don't exactly have much to say for you; it's an interesting start with promising characters. The cold war was always an interesting ...

Hi there! So, um, yeah. This isn't awful, and I've definitely seen poetry that is much worse, but I feel like you can, by any means, do better than what ...

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Wow, these are pretty good! I like them a lot; you're able to show a full range of different styles, from cartoon-like to abstract to realistic. I envy your talent, ...