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Re: Cirque Du Fous (Permission Only; Started)
Name: Aurore Latenne Age: Sixteen Time Period: 18th Century France Gender: Female Appearance: She has light brown hair that goes just goes just above her hips in full, lush curls. ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed
(sorry this post is coming when it is- I've been really busy lately!) Erin When Erin awoke, it was eerie how peaceful everything seemed; the sun, hot against her back, ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Blue Eyed Wonder
AN: This is a very personal poem. I was asked to write it by a friend of mine who is very dear to me; he wanted me to title it ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Unity (1)
AN: This is the beginning snippet of a new novella that I've started. It's rough. This isn't the entire first chapter, but I wouldn't call it a prologue as what ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: April 2011 Statistics
Go Wisconsin! Woo!
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Winterland.
Hey, Jas! So, this was a really neat piece, and I think that if you figured a few things out in terms of the story and the characters, it would ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Imperfectly Fit
Hey Lily. :) So, I really liked this poem a lot. It was really meaningful and sweet, and it was easy to relate to. There isn't a whole lot wrong ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Counting Breaths: Prologue
Hi! So, you have interesting threads here, and it will be neat to see where you take this story and these characters that you've introduced. I suppose my main note ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: hemlock
Perse. You write poetry beautifully. But I think you already know that, don't you? I've always been somewhat mediocre at it, so try to take this review with a grain ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Morbid Circus
Hi, Calligraphy! So, I thought that this was a very well-written poem and that you were able to convey a strong central theme without. I might be a bit biased ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Animalistic
Whoa, okay! So, this is an interesting story. I like the idea of it, and I think you definitely have the potential to take it far. Right now, this just ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Get Warmer
Hi, This was really good. It was sweet and conveyed a lot, but it was also simple and to the point. It was something that was easy to relate to, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: For Rory
Hi, Micki! So, this was an interesting little story and it was well-written from start to finish. Your description was good and it had a nice flow, and in such ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Galaxy
Rewrite of an earlier poem. When I was small, you showed the stars -- glittering eyelets against night's endless black sheet. It was then that I wondered what lied beyond ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Rose Crème and Peppermint Leaves
(I can't believe NaPo is over already!) April 30 - all that time life is short, you see -- all of it has passed in a flash too quick. When ...
Apr 30, 2011
