Elinor

Hello! So, I haven't read the previous two parts so I won't be able to comment on the story as a whole and the continuity/characters -- but still I am ...

Hiya, This was a very hard piece for me to really latch onto, or enjoy or appreciate as a whole. I can tell that you have some good stuff here ...

Hi, Justa! I enjoyed this poem. The theme is a bit overdone, but it's a common experience that a lot of people undergo in some way at some point or ...

Hiya, I just want to say that this was quite an interesting poem that I rather liked a lot. I liked how it wasn't overly detailed or stuffed to the ...

Hi there! I don't know if you did any research before you wrote this short story or if it even was your intent to write a realistic portrayal of how ...

Hey! So, this was a very cool little story, and I'm very glad that I came across it and was able to read it. I can definitely say that I've ...

Hello there! So, I really want to like this short story, but something about it just falls short. You have an intriguing premise that should promise a lot of conflict ...

If you do decide to do another storybook I would love to participate!

Moi. With sunglasses and in black and white.

Love this thread. Love this thread so much. I'm going to try to shoot for between 6 and 11 reviews!

At my school, we have to have a t-shirt (no tank tops, spaghetti straps, etc), either shorts or sweatpants, and tennis shoes, otherwise you can't participate in the daily activity ...

Me with my new glasses:

AN: So, I've wanted to write a science-fiction short story for a while. This is kind of dystopian, and it's the first part. captain.classy helped me with the idea for ...

Erin Erin could barely keep it together. Her eyes were red with tears and she was shaking profusely. She felt like any second she would dart off, running as fast ...

Hayley At three o'clock sharp, Karen arrived in her silver Honda outside of Hayley's apartment. Hoping to make a good impression on the studio and the other actors, she had ...