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Eli

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lost Horse

    Interesting poem. Because I've been analyzing a lot of George Herbert's poetry recently, and reading Melville through a religious lens, I found this poem to have significant religious overtones, possi

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Seven Sketches of Christ

    steps of the temple doves that waver like pilot lights -- latched cages, the steps to the temple smooth as hands washing feet. a handful of coos, soft as a ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Rapunzel atop Babel

    While I continue to question to use of form and other various visual parlor tricks, I enjoyed your poem. Your focus here is obviously not on the language, as the ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: mu-shu

    Petals falling like the paper climax to a chinese firecracker – the kind you find in striped tents in mid-size american cities beside the summer evening midas touch of fifty ...

    Oct 31, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: arithmetic of the heart

    And is this your heart arithmetic? This is the way the wind measures the weather. - Carl Sandburg, "How Much" i the bluest barest silk traveling up your thigh is ...

    Aug 4, 2010


Dogs love their friends and bite their enemies, quite unlike people, who are incapable of pure love and always have to mix love and hate.
— Sigmund Freud