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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lost Horse

    Interesting poem. Because I've been analyzing a lot of George Herbert's poetry recently, and reading Melville through a religious lens, I found this poem to have significant religious overtones, possi

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Seven Sketches of Christ

    steps of the temple doves that waver like pilot lights -- latched cages, the steps to the temple smooth as hands washing feet. a handful of coos, soft as a ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Rapunzel atop Babel

    While I continue to question to use of form and other various visual parlor tricks, I enjoyed your poem. Your focus here is obviously not on the language, as the ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: mu-shu

    Petals falling like the paper climax to a chinese firecracker – the kind you find in striped tents in mid-size american cities beside the summer evening midas touch of fifty ...

    Oct 31, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: arithmetic of the heart

    And is this your heart arithmetic? This is the way the wind measures the weather. - Carl Sandburg, "How Much" i the bluest barest silk traveling up your thigh is ...

    Aug 4, 2010


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