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Re: Lost Horse
Interesting poem. Because I've been analyzing a lot of George Herbert's poetry recently, and reading Melville through a religious lens, I found this poem to have significant religious overtones, possi
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Seven Sketches of Christ
steps of the temple doves that waver like pilot lights -- latched cages, the steps to the temple smooth as hands washing feet. a handful of coos, soft as a ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Rapunzel atop Babel
While I continue to question to use of form and other various visual parlor tricks, I enjoyed your poem. Your focus here is obviously not on the language, as the ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: mu-shu
Petals falling like the paper climax to a chinese firecracker – the kind you find in striped tents in mid-size american cities beside the summer evening midas touch of fifty ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: arithmetic of the heart
And is this your heart arithmetic? This is the way the wind measures the weather. - Carl Sandburg, "How Much" i the bluest barest silk traveling up your thigh is ...
Aug 4, 2010
