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Re: Character Cafe
Marcus on the ground feeling the tingled of his head being snapped. It was a very frightful feeling, slowly getting on his knees he slightly groan. "Dear Lord what a ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: The Guardians: Chapter 2- 3 part 1
Well I don't know where to start but you seem to have a prolem SPACING after the period. You have some Cap letters in your sentence like so: Her blue ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Free Babar Ahmad
Holy Moly, what a piece! This is very good, nice flow and constant rhythm you have. its like a newpaper article written in a poem. Keep wrtiting expecting great things ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Mind's Eye Chapter 2
“ 1.Hey, sorry. I know you probably hate me, but I wanted to know if you wanted to hang out today. 2.Just me and you. I really want to talk.” ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Character Cafe
Marcus getting up from his seat pulling the young ladies from the beast. "Enough! Stop!" Taking the blades away from the young waitress bloody and trembling hands. "You've done enough, ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: The Dawning of Blood *|Starting and Accepting|*
All sins and virtues, are lured by their master's actions. For example, If Greed was coming to the party. There must be money for Greed to come in. Same goes ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: The Dawning of Blood *|Starting and Accepting|*
Marcus & Adonia Both hearing the thunder cracking, their heads raise at the same time even though their not together. Adonia began to shake, "It's starting. " she stood up ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: The Dawning of Blood (Part 2)
Second Dawn You probably thinking why go through all that trouble? Why would the angel go through such humility and violence? Just to send a message, it sound so far ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: The Dawning of Blood *|Starting and Accepting|*
Adonia Adonia walking down towards the church, looking up the sky has turned dark. Sighing softly, feeling a pain in her heart "Amrit..." she spoke softly. She inhaled sharply not ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Camp Demi-God
Name: Jean Blackheart Age (10-18): 18 Parents (Mortal and Godly): (Mother:Prudence) (Father:Hephaestus) Appearance: Personality: Jean is a quite and timid girl, but she is a hard worker. Even so she ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: The Dawning of Blood *|Starting and Accepting|*
Marcus The skies begin to turn black, clouds dense with darkness. Holding onto his bouquet of flowers, the wind starts to get riled up. Sighing heavily, holding back his tears ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Character Cafe
Marcus walks in looking around the place for a table, in his hand his booksbag and a newpaper under his arm. He sighed tiredly, as he walked towards a table ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: The Dawning of Blood *|Starting and Accepting|*
Name: (Marcus Amrit Livingston) Age: (20) Role: (The Marked/Good Brother ) Abilities: (Viktor's Brother, Summoner of the Virtues) History: (As a child he was loved by all of his family, ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: The Dawning of Blood *|Starting and Accepting|*
Name: ( Adonia ) Age: ( N/A ) Role: ( Angel Messenger ) Abilities: ( Marcus’s Guardian/ Healer/ Summoner ) History: ( Adonia wandering around in her past, finding the ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Toys and Tampons
Wow, this is very shockingly good. I was once a young little girl but now.... I need tampons and ice-cream. :(
Oct 26, 2011