Elena_Ravenhill

For me that’s just crazy, I mean a society that is purely in peace and everyone gets along. That sound like a cult, for me I worry about bills every ...

Simply wonderful, it had that nice and gloomy ecstasy. It was very mind consuming; I was very confused The hits come You can change this to something else, but it ...

I really enjoy reading it, even so it needs a bit more into it. I can sense the rush of emotion that you have for this, but it seem to ...

As for me I think it’s fair, at the same time it isn’t? Reason why people might thing that Communism is like you have stated yourself “fair”, everyone could have ...

I'm still writing but I have no encouragement to write the story anymore. Sadly, enough I look back at it and I'm still itchin to write more.

I would love to write like I used to. But, its really hard now that I work and take classes at the same time. I still write on my blog.

Could be longer thought it kinda cute though.

I would agree with Fiyero, the fist stanza was a bit confusing. Comedian and Clown are two different types of entertainers. Furthermore, it seems so rushed as if there was ...

Love is sweet, like milk and honey. Its’ warm sensation that sends chills down your spine, Just like your embrace when you hold me at night. Milk and honey, just ...

Well The Two by four didn't fit it killed the mood, if you used another sort of weapon it would fit perfect. Nevertheless your poem is lovely, I loved the ...

Allo!! New member! I hope you enjoy YWS! I can't wait to read some of your work! Also few questions: What is your favorite food? What is your adored author? ...

Ah Welcome, Its good to see more people. Don't worry its not all about writing poetry. Chat speaking its kinda annoying. Other than that I hope I read some of ...

Wow...its was so touching. I cried literally, my favorite verse was We loved for a time, Passionate and true. But soon we grew restless- Wandering spirits soon do. We each ...

I never thought of it this way, It gave me a better view on how to rhyme in my poetry. I'll use this in the future. :thud:

Again Thank you all for your help. I love to write and I'll keep writing.