ElementalBlood

(Yay, finally got around to reading this!) Poor Ariana :/ Not only is she far away from anyone she knows, she has to care for two very strange boys. I ...

Must...resist...laughter... *Fails* XD! Okay, I'm done. *Wipes away tears from laughing so hard* I'm not very picky about grammar unless it's absolutely awful. You learn forgiveness while teaching peo

Chapter 5 Location: Yugakure The new Yugakage walked around his village, smiling. He admired the village’s quaintness, the blooming flowers and, of course, the hot springs. They were for what ...

It's back after my "little" break. Sorry for anyone offended by the language Kat uses. I hope people will enjoy it and comment. Though I can't do anything about the ...

Back after a long hiatus. Can't believe I missed this being posted >.> Hehe, weasel boy ;P I always look forward to these, keep it up! ~Blood ^_^

I was waiting for this! ^_^ I definitely enjoy this novel, so far. I can't say anything for what I haven't read yet ;P Still waiting for why it's under ...

Chapter 4 As soon as I walked into the library, I hit the computers. I googled a vague description of the creature along with my name for it; hell horse. ...

*facepalm* this piece is so true...Haha. When you get stuck, you feel like slamming the book closed and ignoring it. Calc and Algebra both suck :/ they remind me of ...

Ooh, love it ^_^ I hope Nate can allow us to have our own covers soon. Though I expect it would take a bit to set up :/

Chapter 3 I spun around and saw Duskin standing behind me with Nick following closely behind him. “What the hell are you in here for? Unless someone’s being attacked by ...

This was a hard chapter to write, what with the introduction of three major characters. I hope the point that Amaterasu is exceptionally oblivious came through. I wasn't sure how ...

Thanks for the reviews ^_^ Amaterasu's description was different before, I may change it back. One of my guy friends was over when I was editing it and said "no ...

Starting out: The beginning is incredibly confusing. I thought for the first bit that this story would be told in third person. When you first said "I say alien" it ...

1) when something strikes you, write it down 2) no idea is a bad one 3) when you want to write, just write. Write what you feel, what you see, ...

Ah, just what I needed. An interesting idea as a break from editing. ^_^ You've gotten me curious as to why this is under the fantasy genre, considering it starts ...