ElementalBlood

Chapter 7 Location: Leaf Village Forest "Wait! Where are you taking me?" Rein yelled at Tsuki. Tsukimiya ignored her for the moment. If she had done it right, the Mizukage ...

Chapter 6 Location: Leaf Village Forest Komadori walked towards the forest with Shadow. They were looking for Rein. Ah, there she is! she thought as she started to run over ...

OK, sorry this took so long. A Trojan hijacked my computer. The trumpets rang out loud and clear, their noise slicing through the hubbub on the on looking crowds, their ...

Ah! Been looking for a good read, sounds interesting. O_o I will definitely look this up ^_^ *makes mental note to look for it in a library*

I will return to finish reading (and reviewing) this! By the way, good to have you back ^_^

Please continue this! So, as the story starts out we have a man (Warq) sizing up a woman for sale. Then we have the woman's point of view as well ...

And this chapter ends with yet another investigator! *Gasp* I hope everyone has enjoyed the story so far!

I hope everyone enjoyed the chapter and will review!

As it was requested, I will put a sort of "translation guide" from now on for each of my chapters as I use Japanese honorifics and words to help describe ...

I may have put this under "fantasy" instead of "fanfiction" by accident. Oh well... As a warning to all readers, as this group has gone very inactive as of a ...

Since it's review day today, I hope this'll make the "works with only 1 comment list" so people will see it and review!

First thing that comes to mind: you need to write more of this. Don't leave us hanging here! Okay, let's continue then Apart from a large assortment of grammar issues ...

Okay, let's start this! To fight is to not. To not let your opponent to see your emotions, to not let them anticipate your next move. To not show mercy, ...

Since everyone before me seems to have taken care of the boring, pointing-out-errors type editing, it seems like I can focus more on the plot type editing. Well, more like ...

I like it ^_^ It's a short prologue and a lot of information is crammed in there. Putting spaces between each paragraph would help a bit. Just to make things ...