ElementalBlood

There are circumstances where it's allowed and sometimes expected, like between a parent and child. In the novel I'm working on the father is Rory and his son is named ...

I just got back to the site after two months of NaNo and editing NaNo novel. I can't understand the new layout of this site! I don't know where to ...

III That night, rain pounded the windows and obscured any view of the street. As Aria peered through a slit in the blinds, she wondered if her mother had been ...

First post in a long while. Sorry about that! The unedited, hasn't-been-looked-at-in-4-months chapter 2 of Black Rabbit! Enjoy and ignore my Canadian spelling if it bothers you. (And sorry that ...

Mine will never shut up. Sometimes they'll yell at me for not paying attention to them or they'll argue amongst themselves. They also like making commentary on everything I watch ...

Chapter 3: What do you Mean We Can’t go Home?! I fell face first into the bed. “Y’alright?” Regis asked. He sank into the bunk opposite mine. “Yeah,” I said, ...

Hi newbie :P I'll try to give you a decent review but, I write these things the same way I'd say the words. If that makes things confusing... (Sorry in ...

Haha... A novel? I've got about...17... *has a twitchy fit* 4 of them are a series and are already done ;P well, except editing. I'm having a publishing company look ...

Finally, I've finished editing another chapter of Tainted! God...this one took ages. Well, I hope people like it and review it. I like feedback and I really like people who ...

Amazing ^_^ First of all, props to you for writing in present tense. Most tend to avoid it because it's difficult to keep up. But I didn't see a single ...

Answer time! :P 1) No, those 53 characters are all players. The NPCs are sorted differently, though the same thing applies. 2) Yeah, the teams will have "allies" and will ...

One of the questions last chapter was "Does she meet her sister?" Well, yes. Now anyway. Though I'm not sure why people wanted them to meet last chapter, that would ...

Well, I continued on an idea. Regis has turned out very different from how I first imagined him. He suddenly became a lot more knowledgeable in strange things. Well, I ...

Gotta agree with Miracles and Gryphon. We need...information! Now, I'm not a fan of info-dumping. Overloading someone with too much information at ones makes their brains melt and drip out ...

To clear up a few things: 1) I wrote this about 5 years ago, when I was 13, for a school assignment. So of course it won't sound like it ...