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Are the white dragons Crysi's parents? Cos that was kind of obbvious for me ... I'll delete that if I was right and you want me to. Anyway ... well, ...

5) MAKE YOUR CHARACTERS UGLY Agreed. I read a book where every main character was a beautiful, straight A student, kind and caring, dating football player type of person ... ...

Well, everyone but you then.

You need to read the story to understand. EDIT *fidgets* Ok, I can't stand not to continue this ... Well, I said I wasn't sure on the sheild thing. But ...

Well, the people in your words had to name them, so what do those languages sound like? And think aout it. I mean, there are creatures in the world calld ...

Well I like to get the story flowing first. That doesn't mean even a whole chapter, just so long as I can feel it before I start reserch. But then ...

Hmmmm... I'm not sure how to advise, because I've never thought about the problem before (and now the question is ... why havn't I? It's a perfectly good question) I ...

It's one of my bigger problems too, I have this annoying habit of wanting to write everything. What you could do is say something like: It was a ten minute ...

Must try that! But I have to know when I'm just about to sleep and remember to think of something then without re-waking myself .... harder than it sounds!

One problem. Editors really aren't that stupid. A good editor is so known in his profession he/she will just toss that sort of thing aside. They want to read your ...

I'm like mesh, I don't borrow ideas. It's just something I can't do. However, you could start with something that happened to you sometime, like how you felt about something ...

I plan. I plan, or the plot dies. It's not set in stone, and I don't plan it sentence by sentence or anything, but it's never made me feel less ...

Well, some people don't like writing outlines or plans. I do though.

Same, except I like it more...

I have such a cursed common name! (Lucy) It's not bad as names go, but there's always another one lurking behind you somewhere, just waiting for someone to call to ...