Elelel

This does leave you wanting to find out what happens more. I spotted one little typo, but I won't bother you with it. hope you feel more inspired for the ...

I think you jumped tenses once in the intro. Interesting story ... someone rubs pizza on their face. Cool.

YAY!!! Guess what? I'm going to share stuff with you all! Isn't that great? It is. Trust me. Now you can say "Well at least I write description better than ...

Yay! Band! Clarinet rocks. Ugh... you had bring up those reeds? Do not fear! I'm going into buisness with a friend who plays clarinet to make reed spray! Flavoured spray, ...

Eh. Don't know about Snape under Dumbledores orders. Good theory though. But ... I don't know. I'd rather he killed not under orders if it were up to me. I'd ...

I figured Regulus Black straight away too. *mutters to self* Just take away the victory why don't you *grins* ignore me. I running low on caffine right now. *shrugs* the ...

I liked the book a lot. One of, if not, the best of the seris. To the point too. No annoying waflle (not saying I don't like long books mind). ...

I was going to say that!!! *pretends to sulk* My big "idea" (which is probably not at all origanal, but I've never seen it before) is my fairies are bad. ...

Once the sky was blue. And then just as suddenly it was orange. Well one day, or was it night? I can't remember which it was now. Oh yes, it ...

This is great, (and all the other things, but I'll focus on this one) I love the colour the draws your eye to the face (and hair) I don't think ...

Ok, I'm serious on art and know exactly what I'm doing here, so I'm not going to spend a whole critique going "I like it!" like I do for poetry. ...

Very nice! Great how you didn't make it a picture of the whole person, or even of the whole face. That's exellent composition. It took me ... I can't remember ...

Do you learn art at school? Or even out of school? Because the people are wonderfully in proportion (no legs twice as long as the other leg, and the heads ...

One of my parents have/are reading the Da Vinci Code (probably mum, dad think fictional books are boring... honestly!), I've seen it hovering around the place. I need to nah ...

I've almost read every one of her books (I had to post-pone Circle opens 3 due to the book club and can't find book 4 in pathetic small town bookshop... ...