Elelel

I don't like writing in an exposed place. That's probably just paranoia though. So, I don't like using the office computer because it just feels open and people walk in ...

Yep. I love TV shows and movies. They're stories too, after all. Sometimes they just make me want to write. Like, that was such a great story I just HAVE ...

She was pretty big in Australia, I think. I was 7 when she died. I can't say I knew a lot about famous people when I was 7. In fact, ...

Hello! I'm glad you've posted more of this story. It's interesting! Ok. You've still got awkward patches. Like: [Quote deleted at original author's request] You've got too many "with"s, and ...

[quote]Do other countries besides the US celebrate the Fourth of July?[quote] Do you celebrate Australia Day? Hehe. No, we don't celebrate the 4th of July here. I only found out ...

Make him a villain, but with opposing objectives to the other villains! Seeing as you said your villains were fun.

Hey! 'Tis I! I found some time! Homework is just the worst, isn't it? But anyway, on to business. The early-day sun shone weakly down into the streets of the ...

Start writing! Some pretty cool stuff can just pop into existence when you're writing, and anyway, if you start you easily find the ideas you need to work on more. ...

Loved it! Loved it! *dances around* It is officially my favourite HP book! I can't BELEIVE we're on the four page of discussion and no one has said anything about ...

Intersting start! You're getting me quite involved in your story, which is always a good thing. [Quote deleted at original author's request] Ok, let's have a look at this paragraph. ...

YAY!!! I love the books. When my friend first told me to read them, I didn't want to because he used the words "You'lll love them" which always make me ...

I'm happy with paperback or hardback. I voted hardback though because they give off an air of specialness. I've never read an E-book, but they don't sound fun. Very un-bookish. ...

Short, sharp and shiny. Me likes! You're pretty good at getting the description to seem all natural and part of the story. Maybe in the future try and work in ...

I think it's a bit funner to torture a character who will fight back and try to overcome the situation than one who's just going to sit down and have ...

YAY!!! YWS is back! I was just starting to imagine a world where yws died and it was not a pretty world. Nate, you saved my life!