Elelel

*points to Darkmoon's age* you did that and your twelve (no age discrimination intended), that's good, very good. PS, love your signature, just noticed it! :lol:

Yes, people have affected or influenced me until I became a whole new person ... but not always in a good way, there were these bullies once when I was ...

I'm too good. It's annoying, like some disease where you can't do anything wrong. I get good grades, but that doesn't mean I like school, actually I hate it sometimes. ...

I rarely respond to any PMs... We never would have thought if you hadn't said. :roll: No offense in that, just a joke. Sooo, you're back to your first name? ...

That should have been "At the [i]moment[i/]..." Happy had the mouse while I was typing. I'm so touched, or I would be if you didn't go all concerned over every ...

So hope the people that replied before enjoy it this time *pretends to be indignant* I said I enjoyed it before, didn't I? And I did. So there. *sticks out ...

Ps, the new name sounds great! I'll keep look out for the revised version! EDIT: Oh, it's already there, now I feel like a real idiot... :oops:

There we go! And there's heaps there handy for ANYBODY, no one has nothing to learn. About what you said with the character descriptions ... There's a healthy amount of ...

Well, yes, you need to pace it out more. Add stuff like character development and so forth, everything seems really ... vague. Like there's no picture in your head as ...

NIce!!! Love-r-ly and nice. I like it. However ... "Oh no, oh no, oh no, its them, its the Careon, oh no," I wouldn't keep that as one long sentence. ...

We went camping with some friends of the family. I got to drive in a paddock, and so did everyone else (kids, I'm the eldest) we met "George" (to be ...

Erm ... no. Deffinately no. I don't get on with people who try to control me, same as Crysi, and I'd probably chuck a mental if they tried to use ...

Right! I'm back with time on my hands! Now... firstly, the "my stomach is parched" thing is still getting to me. I have never heard anyone say it before, and ...

Well, a good idea would be to say exactly what this person is being trained for. Because right now that's confusing a lot of people, and could easily be fixed. ...

Yes, a very good start! That first sentence confused me, but otherwise everything seemed fine.