Elelel

... yeah, they do get repetitive, but I read them when I was younger, and I didn't care then.

O! Excuse for a party! *thows confetti* ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ...

I've only started writing poetry this month, so I'm not good at it, but I liked that! There were a few slight fixy up thingies that the others suggested that ...

Tep, Australian spelling too! You'll think twice before you offend our blessed spelling again!!! jk Anyway, I thought this was really, really good. It could work as either a first ...

Agreed, this is good!

ohhhh... I like this! I love it how the vampire thinks. It would be a good story to continue! I presume the two people the vampire kills are the children ...

This sounds interesting *rushes off to one of the boards where points are visible to marvel at them*

When my English teacher told me that you're meant to limit the use of adjectives and adverbs, I was pretty shocked. Particually since we had spent the last few weeks ...

Yep. My characters have minds of their own. You wouldn't believe the sort of thing they've made me let them do...

Hey, Nate, you said people over 9 didn't exist... THAT MEANS YOU DON'T EXIST!!! Oh no! I've gone crazy and am talking to an imaginary person again!!!!

You're from New Zealand? Cool! I want to visit there... what's the time there? Because the dreaded time difference means I'm usually on by myself... but if your time is ...

Me niether, I havn't read them for... oh, must be two years now... but I will again sometime...

8) . A DECIMAL POINT!!!!!!

I loved the opening! I liked it. The gang stuff was interesting, and the description of New London. It's too bad the quotation marks were missing, their absence made it ...

... yes... there IS only one word to describe that... and it'a already been said! but I'll repeat it. POWERFUL.