Elelel

I write fantasy. When I write a story, I usually get a spark of inspiration, and I take it from there. For the story I'm working on at the moment, ...

Has anyone read any books by Terry Pratchet? He's written lots. I've read some. I thought they were funny and intertaining. What do other people think?

I couldn't believe my eyes. All my beliefs had been shattered overnight. I no longer know what to think.

... I know what's going on, but am also very confused... It would be interesting to go and see what library puts myths under actually.

Well to be honest, I can't really taste much difference between coke and pepsi so I can't reallly say which is better. I like them both, so usually I just ...

... There was this one time, my main character was a slave, and she hit the slave master! Just when I was going to get her free too!!! So then ...

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. He hated pickles on ...

I like the idea niteowl :D, I'd probably join that usergroup school might interupt... oh wait, holidays start soon! Yeah, I'm interested!!!

*shuffles away from zzap* Nah, jk! :lol: Quite frankly, I completely suck at computers, I've never been on a chat room *cringes* don't laugh. But I'd think it'd probably be ...

That took so long to read, I can't hink of any other places that needed work just yet, I'll have a look later or tomorrow. Promise! Like it so far ...

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potato to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving bird's poop and underwear. He hated pickles on

I couldn't be bothered manually seperating paragraphs in my story, so it looks like one big solid mass. It makes it a little more difficult to read, but doesn't make ...

TV serises of books are usually lame. I once saw one on Terry Pratchets "Bromeliad" triliogy, which they made look boring, (which, if you've ever read the books, you'd know ...

Hello and welcome. Is there anything in particular you need help with?

Yep, the flow is good. :D The first line ought to be split in two as Firestarter said, as well as those other adustments. But overall, it's really good. Well ...