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Re: injured teenager
Hello! Let me be one of the first to say welcome to YWS! It's great you've joined, hope to see you around for a long time to come. Just before ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Let Not My Eyes Wander
Hello! Man....this was good. Haven't read a good poem like this in ages. You did a heck of a lot of things right by this. Firstly, the subject matter is ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Steps
Tiny steps from midnight into dawn, have made patterns in my mind, a hundred million times. I see them left behind, steaming in the morning as I go, like a ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Ladies
This was good, I can't really give much criticism as it seems pretty free verse. The language was good- for the most part, sometimes in trying to make it flow ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Wait For Regret
Hey Jon! Sorry I haven't been very active lately with reviewing your poems, or other people's for that matter, my poetry hasn't exactly been easy to write lately, and thus ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment?
Use Somebody- Kings of Leon
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Mines
The embers of sunlight are fading in my eyelids and through this witching hour of half etherized sleep-- I see little orbs of black floating in the amber. Those mines, ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
And a more recent one! Apologies for the double post!
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Just to jump on the bandwagon, here's two of me.... One when I was younger, I think that's an ice cream in my hand- it was in camp.... Before I ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: An Awful Disease's Parodox: the pain of contortions
Hey, how's it going? Firstly, I want to thank you for posting this. If anything, I feel more educated on the subject of Tourettes. I didn't know what it was ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Why Catholics are awesome...
Haha- Go us! *Smiles proudly Major Catholic Win....for once!
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Relapse
Here I go, again. Slipping down to the bottom, of dull feeling, at the warm pit. Another relapse, again, into you. I wouldn’t be so sorry to be sick, If ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Bedazzled
Bedazzled Caught like a deer, standing in headlights, that’s what you did to me, one of those nights. Late in the summer, early in our lives, after I met you, ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: If Nobody Moved
What if all the burning what ifs where never born, or no one noticed that Mona Lisa looked forlorn? If April was the cruellest month, or if we didn't gaze ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Whisper
In speckled gutters and wet avenues, In blank faces of winding café queues. Bleeding through the cobbles of the street, It follows, carried in policemen’s feet. In the folds of ...
Nov 16, 2008
