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Re: A bad person
I don't suppose you'll believe that it all started with a can of coke. But then again, for quite some time, no one has really believed what ever I've said ...
Jan 31, 2008 -
Re: The Closest Way
Suppose the closest way to death, That ever shimmering depression? I think that's what I’ll do. On a night’s harsh wind, maybe I'll take The next road, and walk until ...
Jan 31, 2008 -
Re: Meditate
Really good intro- didnt really like the middle bit but loved the end. I great insight into Mediation though! Nice job, keep on writing.
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: Snowbird
I think I've fallen in love with this poem. The imagery is simply brilliant and it carrys the enitre thing, leaving pictures in my mind. Nice job
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: There
Brilliant. I can't really add much to that. Well done.
Jan 29, 2008 -
Re: Seven Deadly Sins #1 [Lust]
Hey, I thought I already reviewed this, but I must have logged off or something....anyway! Back to the topic! Firstly, I was drawn to this through the detailed use of ...
Jan 29, 2008 -
Re: I Am Who I Am
Hey, I really like this! Not much to add, I love it the way it is. Great job for the 7th Grade!
Jan 29, 2008 -
Re: I'm not seducing you but...
Hey, I actually quite like this. Its a really gcod start, and its easy to read out loud (although, maybe the structure needs a little work) but I really like ...
Jan 28, 2008 -
Re: I'll know by then
Why I am not like them? Full of vision and plans Then, I wouldn’t be alone. Perhaps I am a kite, Broke free of its strings, Which is creative and ...
Jan 28, 2008 -
Re: All for me
Hey, I'm new here so I thought I'd check out everyone's poems. I really like this, it seems as if you loaded alot of heart and emotion into the verses, ...
Jan 27, 2008 -
Re: Love, I'm Sorry
Hey this is a great poem about all the aspects that come with love. Its really heartfelt and protrays a very effective insight into the speaker's thoughts and feelings. However ...
Jan 27, 2008 -
Re: The Earth is small
I really actually like this. Its not to long, and its a good subject to write a poem about because it provides you with a lot of stuff to talk ...
Jan 27, 2008 -
Re: Just a poem
I just felt like writing a poem A chance to let my mind roam Past the window, out to the sky To the land up there, in my mind's eye. ...
Jan 26, 2008
